My First Poetry

It is a Parody of Revlon add in Manmadhudu (a Telugu Movie).
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In English
If a person has symptoms of madness, illusion, inertia and darkness
He is known as a person in  "Mode of Ignorance"
if a person has symptoms of  great attachment, uncontrollable desire, hankering, and intense endeavor develop
He is known as a person in  "Mode of Passion"
if a person with his thoughts , words and deeds shows all positivity
He is known as a person in  "Mode of Goodness"
If a person Transcends these Three Gunas /Modes
He is known as a person in  "Krishna Consciousness"
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In Telugu
Oka manishi Andhakaram lo, Budhi heenatha tho, Somarithanam tho unte
atanu "Tamo Gunam" lo unnadani artam
Oka manishi Korika, Tapana, Lobhamu, teevra yatnam tho unte
atanu "Rajo Gunam" lo unnadani artam
Oka manishi manchi panulu chesthu, manchi matalu matladuthu, andariki manchi jaragaalani korukunte
atanu "Satva Gunam" lo unnadani artam
ivevi kaka Dwandwalanu samadrusthi tho chuse vadini
Krishna Chaitanyam lo unnadani artam

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