My First Poetry

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In English
If a person has symptoms of madness, illusion, inertia and darkness
He is known as a person in  "Mode of Ignorance"
if a person has symptoms of  great attachment, uncontrollable desire, hankering, and intense endeavor develop
He is known as a person in  "Mode of Passion"
if a person with his thoughts , words and deeds shows all positivity
He is known as a person in  "Mode of Goodness"
If a person Transcends these Three Gunas /Modes
He is known as a person in  "Krishna Consciousness"
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In Telugu
Oka manishi Andhakaram lo, Budhi heenatha tho, Somarithanam tho unte
atanu "Tamo Gunam" lo unnadani artam
Oka manishi Korika, Tapana, Lobhamu, teevra yatnam tho unte
atanu "Rajo Gunam" lo unnadani artam
Oka manishi manchi panulu chesthu, manchi matalu matladuthu, andariki manchi jaragaalani korukunte
atanu "Satva Gunam" lo unnadani artam
ivevi kaka Dwandwalanu samadrusthi tho chuse vadini
Krishna Chaitanyam lo unnadani artam

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10 Topics of SrimadBhagavatham

the ten subject matters dealt with in the text of the Bhāgavatam. Of these, the tenth is the substance, and the other nine are categories derived from the substance. These ten subjects are listed as follows:

(1) Sarga: the first creation by Viṣṇu, the bringing forth of the five gross material elements, the five objects of sense perception, the ten senses, the mind, the intelligence, the false ego and the total material energy, or universal form.

(2) Visarga: the secondary creation, or the work of Brahmā in producing the moving and unmoving bodies in the universe (brahmāṇḍa).

(3) Sthāna: the maintenance of the universe by the Personality of Godhead, Viṣṇu. Viṣṇu’s function is more important and His glory greater than Brahmā’s and Lord Śiva’s, for although Brahmā is the creator and Lord Śiva the destroyer, Viṣṇu is the maintainer.

(4) Poṣaṇa: special care and protection for devotees by the Lord. As a king maintains his kingdom and subjects but nevertheless gives special attention to the members of his family, so the Personality of Godhead gives special care to His devotees who are souls completely surrendered to Him.

(5) Ūti: the urge for creation, or initiative power, that is the cause of all inventions, according to the necessities of time, space and objects.

(6) Manv-antara: the periods controlled by the Manus, who teach regulative principles for living beings who desire to achieve perfection in human life. The rules of Manu, as described in the Manu-saṁhitā, guide the way to such perfection.

(7) Īśānukathā: scriptural information regarding the Personality of Godhead, His incarnations on earth and the activities of His devotees. Scriptures dealing with these subjects are essential for progressive human life.

(8) Nirodha: the winding up of all energies employed in creation. Such potencies are emanations from the Personality of Godhead who eternally lies in the Kāraṇa Ocean. The cosmic creations, manifested with His breath, are again dissolved in due course.

(9) Mukti: liberation of the conditioned souls encaged by the gross and subtle coverings of body and mind. When freed from all material affection, the soul, giving up the gross and subtle material bodies, can attain the spiritual sky in his original spiritual body and engage in transcendental loving service to the Lord in Vaikuṇṭhaloka or Kṛṣṇaloka. When the soul is situated in his original constitutional position of existence, he is said to be liberated. It is possible to engage in transcendental loving service to the Lord and become jīvan-mukta, a liberated soul, even while in the material body.

(10) Āśraya: the Transcendence, the summum bonum, from whom everything emanates, upon whom everything rests, and in whom everything merges after annihilation. He is the source and support of all. The āśraya is also called the Supreme Brahman, as in the Vedānta-sūtra (athāto brahma jijñāsā, janmādy asya yataḥ

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దశహర అనే సoస్కృత పదం క్రమంగా దసరాగా మారింది.  మనలోని పది అవగుణాలను హరించేది ఈ "దశహర" పoడుగ

కామ (Lust)

క్రోధ (Anger)

మోహ (Attachment)

లోభ (Greed)

మద (Over Pride)

మాత్సర్య (Jealousy)

స్వార్థ (Selfishness)

అన్యాయ (Injustice)

అమానవత్వ (Cruelty)

అహంకార (Ego)

ఈపది దుర్గుణాలపై విజయం సాధించే శక్తినిచ్చేది కనుక దీనిని "విజయదశమి"  అనికూడా అంటారు. 

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